Q1. So, in the end, how’d your WP2 paper go? What were you happy with? What weren’t you? Why? Be specific!
I wrote shitty first draft because I had a little too much fun on Halloween(but Zack told us to have fun so…) but after doing the peer review with my group, I was able to come up with thesis statement. So I like my final product. My peer review group pointed out what exactly I was missing in my paper. I reorganized my essay, corrected some vocab errors, and cited more sources from our course reader.
Q2. Which 2 or 3 comments that you received yesterday were the most helpful for you? Why?
It was helpful to know that I can have stronger thesis statement by reorganizing paragraphs and adding more statements that relate to my “possible” strong thesis statement.
(Idk if I'm doing this right...)
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